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Like a Dirty Window

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Is life just a blur
Or is it the whole big world
That is moving fast
This is how everything seems to me sometimes, like one big blur, though I can never understand exactly why. And of course, this is a very condensed version of how I actually feel, because I doubt I would be able to find words that are adequate to my feelings, and it would probably be one (very long) page, so this is my 'Haiku-version'. I love writings Haiku's, because though they may seem simple, to write a really good one you have to be able to find precise words with the correct syllables, then fit everything you have to say into those three little lines. I regard it as a very nice challenge.
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dolphin-ocean's avatar
You are so good at these! :aww: